Friday, February 8, 2008

STORY TIME!! "Drowning the Sounds" (ch 2)

Once upon a time in the great (and of course far away) country of West lived a young knight. He married a lovely young maiden and God had blessed them with children. He was well known throughout the land as the “Sharpest Sword in the West”.

Sometime ago, the knight had refused the king’s request to ride out with his fellow knights and take back the land that was overrun by invaders. In spite of his training, the knight chose to live in relative peace with his family on an estate provided by the King; the King was both merciful and wise.

One day, as the young knight was returning home from the royal courts he thought he heard the sounds of battle far off, but the sounds were faint. By the time he stopped to listen, the battle sounds were gone. He could hear only the leaves dancing in the wind, the eagle’s song above his head, and the fast pounding of his heart.

In the silence, his excitement grew. His breathing began to quicken and chills ran down his back. Was it his imagination again? Was it another of those “strange coincidences” that he had encountered lately? He wanted something -- but what? There was something missing in his life but he refused to think about it. The familiar feeling that he ought to DO something had returned, and this time it was strong.

The knight tried telling himself that there are others handling the battles, and, they are, no doubt, better qualified for the job. He thought about the work that had to be done at home. He told himself the King allowed him to stay back – it was the will of the King. The knight’s mind would have kept going, but the horse stirred under him and he was jolted back to the task at hand. Unsettled, he continued on his way home.

At home, there were enough distractions to keep him occupied; the important questions from earlier were stifled. The knight found respite by focusing on the daily work. There was fire wood to split, barn animals to feed, stalls to clean, fences to mend, and repairs to be made on his home. He helped his wife draw water from the well and carried it back in the house. With the work done, he took some time to play with his son and daughter. Later in the evening, the family gathered by the fire to hear his eloquent explanations of sword fighting technique and read stories from The King’s Book of Wisdom.

After the children were asleep the knight settled at his desk. He took paper and quill and wrote letters to his friends, neighbors, and business associates. His loving wife sat next to him reading peacefully. After some time, she got up, smiled, embraced him gently, and retired for the night.

With a willing heart, the knight forgot about the sounds of battle he heard earlier that day…

He finished his letters;
blew out the candle;
walked over to the bed and got in.

He thought about the next day’s activities;
and fell sound asleep.

Meanwhile, there were sounds of battle far off,
but the sounds... were no longer faint.
The kingdom is still at war.

12 comments:

  1. I met Jenn once at a coffee house and saw her sweet heart. Your blog was referenced through a comment to hers. Your style of story telling is a lot like John Eldridge in how you portray life as an adventure. Keep doing a good job in your ministry and in your story telling. peace to your family. my favorite verse as well.

    my blog is www.scottrdavis.blogspot.com
    in Christ I stand, scott

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  2. hi! i just ran across your page - great blog! keep up the good work!!

    kara

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  3. Thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it.

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  4. It sounds like the real battle is within. Does the Knight not trust the King's plan, or does the Knight not believe in the purpose of the battle?

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  5. Perhaps the King allowed the Knight to stay behind because it did not conflict with his purpose at the time. When the battle gets closer the Knight will be called to draw his sword for the King - only at the King's command and his timing.

    Fellow storyteller.

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  6. The King had asked the young knight (along with other fellow knights) to go on a mission, but the young knight had refused at that time. (see previous story “The Sharpest Sword in the West”)

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  7. Good reminder! I’m not sure the young knight is “Mathew 4:20” material at this point in the story...

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  8. I suspect Peter and Andrew didn't think they were Matthew 4:20 material at the time either...

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  9. Aren't we all Matthew 4:20 material? When the King says go (or come as in the case of Matthew 4:20) won't he equip us? The Knight seems to be struggling with a timing issue because of his beloved family. I believe in the knight! I think his willing heart to serve the King will allow him to discern the point at which he needs to take up his sword and enter the battle away from home. At that point it will be a "new direction of call." He seem to be participating in the battle right now as husband/father. Plus, it seems he is training and preparing for something new, a new direction of call!

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  10. Thanks for the perspective! I believe I understand and appreciate the point made. (and I’m glad you made it) People sometimes are “Mathew 20 material” (i.e. they are immediately obedient to God’s call) but I’m not sure that happens all the time… and yes, if God calls us to a particular work, he does equip us. The problem of the “timing” introduces some very tough questions. Does God not have “perfect timing”? Are we better qualified to determine the right time for when to obey God’s call?

    At this point in the story, the knight is struggling with the decision he made. We see in the story that although the knight was disobedient to the king and did not trust the king enough to obey the original assignment, in spite of that, the king is merciful. (the king is the one who is the real provider and protector of the family). The knight understands that it is the king’s prerogative to select the battles the knight needs to be in, and it is the responsibility of the knight to obey. With all that said, I’m sure the king is not finished with the knight – the king is merciful.

    The bottom line: the knight received a mission from the king; the knight was fully equipped for that mission; the knight did not trust and obey the king enough to go on that mission; the knight mixed-up his priorities. Although taking care of family is a noble duty, the king had asked the knight to go on a mission which (at least temporarily) took him away from the family. (no one said that being a knight will be a cushy job)

    Caution: the moral of the story is not that we should ignore our family duties, but rather that each day we need to seek God’s will for us.

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  11. Good story, can't wait to hear more. It came alive because your readers (at least this one) tried to place themselves into it from our own perspective.

    It came alive in the context of my spiritual walk. Amen to God's mercy and his perfect timeing. Turning down a call early in life may mean accepting the same call later in life! Which comes with many consequences.

    Thanks for finally posting the moral!

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